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They Guard You From Every Harm

Postby Uprising123 » Sat Dec 17, 2011 11:37 pm

I see Katniss in the tree next to me looking down at the Careers. I want to tell her to run, hide, and do whatever she can to get away from that tree, because when I glance up, I see suddenly a Tracker Jacker nest. I try to get her attention, knowing she cannot get away with the Careers below, but maybe she can at least climb down a bit without disturbing the nest. All of a sudden, she finally sees me. I look above her to indicate they are there. With a start, she sees them. She seems to be thinking. And all I want is her to get away from there without being noticed...

That was just a short story about what Rue was thinking when she saved Katniss from the tracker jacker nest. I hoped you liked it! (To me it wasn't that good...)
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Re: They Guard You From Every Harm

Postby peetankatnisslove1 » Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:30 am

Its really good: )
I want..
A guy like peeta.<3
A friend like rue.:)
A sister like prim.:D
A best friend like gale.;)
A hero like katniss<3( :
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A stylist like cinna!:-D
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Re: They Guard You From Every Harm

Postby Uprising123 » Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:38 am

Ehhh.... I still really don't like it...
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Re: They Guard You From Every Harm

Postby peetankatnisslove1 » Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:41 am

Well, its good : ) thats just my thoughts on itt. : D
I want..
A guy like peeta.<3
A friend like rue.:)
A sister like prim.:D
A best friend like gale.;)
A hero like katniss<3( :
And
A stylist like cinna!:-D
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They Guard You From Every Harm

Postby Uprising123 » Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:46 am

Well... Thanks!
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Re: They Guard You From Every Harm

Postby PEETA*POWER!!16 » Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:47 am

really descriptive! you should tell more stories from the arena in Rue's point of view!
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Re: They Guard You From Every Harm

Postby Uprising123 » Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:51 am

You think? I might if I get time! :D
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Re: They Guard You From Every Harm

Postby peetankatnisslove1 » Sun Dec 18, 2011 1:32 am

PEETA*POWER!!16 wrote:really descriptive! you should tell more stories from the arena in Rue's point of view!


Yessssss! Agreed!
I want..
A guy like peeta.<3
A friend like rue.:)
A sister like prim.:D
A best friend like gale.;)
A hero like katniss<3( :
And
A stylist like cinna!:-D
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Re: They Guard You From Every Harm

Postby Uprising123 » Sun Dec 18, 2011 2:39 am

I don't know.... Someone else has already done it... Should I really go along with it?
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Re: They Guard You From Every Harm

Postby Uprising123 » Sun Dec 18, 2011 3:23 am

....
When I realize she is going to knock to the Tracker Jacker nest, I jump to a far away tree. I start thinking why she is doing this. I assume she'd already been stung when she saw the nest. I want to go help her, but if I get stung, I'm as good as dead. I think about her sister Prim and how she volunteered for her at the reaping and wonder if she would have done that for me too. No one volunteered for me. I decide to get close enough to see what is happening. I see most of the Careers running for their lives toward the sparkling lake to escape the Tracker Jackers. Below me, a tribute named Glimmer is dying from their venom. Katniss takes Glimmer's bow before the hovercraft comes to collect her body. Suddenly, Peeta comes back soaking wet and urgently tells Katniss to leave before the rest of the careers get back. As Katniss runs away, Cato comes through the woods, yells at Peeta for letting her go, takes out his sword and slashes Peeta's leg. Cato kicks Peeta and says he's worthless and leaves him to die...
TAAAA DAAAAAA!!
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