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Re: Second Chance

Postby District11 » Mon Jun 11, 2012 4:25 pm

ilovepeeta wrote:Awwwww thats too bad


But i'll type it in, i really want you guys to read it!!!! :D
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Re: Second Chance

Postby ilovepeeta » Mon Jun 11, 2012 6:18 pm

I want to read it
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Re: Second Chance

Postby District11 » Mon Jun 11, 2012 6:25 pm

ilovepeeta wrote:I want to read it


Okay!!! :D
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Re: Second Chance

Postby Mia106 » Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:20 pm

ilovepeeta wrote:Ok so heres my first fic


He woke up in the middel of the night to the sound of crying.   "Who is that?" Gale thought drowsily to himself walking to his  front door.  The sound grew louder as he opened the door.  On his door step was a little blond baby,  wrapped in a light pink blanket, almost the same color of a primrose he thought,  face red from crying,  and a note pined to her blaket.  Gale took the baby inside and read the note.  Gale, Here's a second chance, take advantage of it.  I know the bombs weren't your fault now. Please take care of her as you did me. Thank you.  ~ Prim
     "I can't just put her back out there, I owe it to Prim to take care of her," he says, cradeling the tiny baby, "I don't have any baby stuff how can i take care of her."   The baby opens her eyes, they are bright blue, just like Prim. He knew what he had to name her, Primrose.  But not Prim, it reminds him too much of her, what about Rose then,  he thought.  "Rose," he wispers to the baby who fell asleep in his arms, "I think I like it," he concludes, "What do you think?" he asks the sleeping baby.  The baby nuzzles into Gale's arms as if to say yes.  "Rose it is then."  



It's really good, but Prim died righ after the bombs, how could she know she was going to die? So how could she write the leeter, and whose kid is it? It can't be Prim's
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Re: Second Chance

Postby ilovepeeta » Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:22 pm

Thats the point its like a gift from prim from the after life or like a rencarnation of her
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Re: Second Chance

Postby Mia106 » Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:23 pm

So now Prim's a ghost? And if it is Prim, why does the kid like hunting? Prim hated hunted
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Re: Second Chance

Postby ilovepeeta » Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:25 pm

Idk i just made it like that sorry
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Re: Second Chance

Postby Mia106 » Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:29 pm

:lol: I like it though, and if you make Gale seem bad, I'll write one with Peeta
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Re: Second Chance

Postby ilovepeeta » Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:30 pm

Dont worry i wont
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Re: Second Chance

Postby ilovepeeta » Tue Jun 12, 2012 8:48 am

Ch 3

Once there were all setteled Gale asks "So what brings you to District 2?"   "I can't come and visit my best friend?" Katniss asks with a laugh.  "You're right," Gale replies laughing as well.  "So how have you been?" Peeta asks.  "Good. And yourself?" Gale replies.  "Never been happier," Peeta says.  "Agreed," Katniss says snuggling closer to Peeta.   "So um you two have kids now?" Gale asks awkwardly.  "Oh, um yes.  Rue and Finn.  And who is this?" Peeta replies gesturing to Rose who was sitting on Gale's lap.  "Oh um this is Rose.  Rose come on say hi."  "Hi," Rose wispers.  "Why are you so quiet?" Rue asks.  "Rue, that was impolite," Katniss says. "Sorry," Rue mutters. "It's ok, she usely isn't this quiet," Gale says a little worried.  "She's probably just a little shy," Peeta suggests.  "Yeah maybe," Gale says.  "So are you married?" Katniss asks.  "No."  "Then um Rose is..."  "I found her on my door step 5 years ago with a note from Prim," Gale replies.  "Really?" Katniss asks.  "Yes, she said it was kinda like a second chance after what happened with the bombs, thats why I named her Primrose, Rose for short," Gale explains.  

     "Wow," Peeta says in awe, braking the silence.  "Can I uh hold her for a little?" Katniss asks still in shock.  "Sure," Gale says a little cofused, nudging Rose towards Katniss.  Katniss hugs her tightly thinking she looks just like Prim.  "She looks like Prim doesn't she?" Gale asks knowing exactly what Katniss is thinking.  "She dose," Katniss replies letting go of Rose
who runs back to Gale.  "She can hunt too," Gale remarks holding Rose close to him.  "I shot a squirrel," Rose says finding her voice.  "Lucky, Mama won't let me use her bow and arrows," Rue says exasperatedly.  "When you're older," Katniss and Peeta say at the same time clearly having gone over this with Rue multiple times all ready.  Rue sighs dramatically.  Rose giggles at Rue's dramatics.  Rue smiles at this small victory "So you wanna play now?" she asks.  Rose looks up at Gale unsure.  He gives her an encouraging nod "Go have fun."  Rose nods "OK."  Rue smiles and grabs Rose's hand dragging the some what timid girl outside.  Gale watches the two girls run outside and smiles.   
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