Confessions of a Murder Suspect

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Do you think this sounds good? It's my review that I'm submitting.

Confessions of a Murder Suspect was gripping all the way to the last page. There was never a dull moment. There were always new surprises.
The way James Patterson wrote the book, mentioning important things in passing and then saying that 'that is another story, for another conversation', made you never want to put the book down. The sircumstances surounding the murder made you keep speculating who the murderer was, but never knowing for sure.The plot of the book was fresh and orginal; the ending something I never would have expected.
I highly recomend this book for anyone who's looking for a novel with never-ceasing action. However, the book does require a wide vocabulary and does have a few swears. I would recomend this book for ages no younger than 12+ do to content, though it depends on maturuity level.

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I fixed the spelling errors

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Do you think this sounds good? It's my review that I'm submitting.

Confessions of a Murder Suspect was gripping all the way to the last page. There was never a dull moment. There were always new surprises.
The way James Patterson wrote the book, mentioning important things in passing and then saying that 'that is another story, for another conversation', made you never want to put the book down. The sircumstances surounding the murder made you keep speculating who the murderer was, but never knowing for sure.The plot of the book was fresh and orginal; the ending something I never would have expected.
I highly recomend this book for anyone who's looking for a novel with never-ceasing action. However, the book does require a wide vocabulary and does have a few swears. I would recomend this book for ages no younger than 12+ do to content, though it depends on maturuity level.

"Confessions of a Murder Suspect was gripping from the first to the last page. There was never a dull moment and always new surprises.

The way James Patterson wrote, mentioning important things in passing but then adding "that is another story, for another conversation," made you never want to put the book down. The circumstances surrounding the murder would always keep you speculating who committed it, but would never give away anything for sure. The plot was fresh and original, the ending unexpected.

I highly recommend this book for anyone who is looking for a novel with neverending action. However, the book does require a more broad vocabular and does contain mild language. I would say this book is for children older than twelve due to content."




Just how I'd re-write some of it, you might wanna add a bit more

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Do you think this sounds good? It's my review that I'm submitting.

Confessions of a Murder Suspect was gripping all the way to the last page. There was never a dull moment. There were always new surprises.
The way James Patterson wrote the book, mentioning important things in passing and then saying that 'that is another story, for another conversation', made you never want to put the book down. The sircumstances surounding the murder made you keep speculating who the murderer was, but never knowing for sure.The plot of the book was fresh and orginal; the ending something I never would have expected.
I highly recomend this book for anyone who's looking for a novel with never-ceasing action. However, the book does require a wide vocabulary and does have a few swears. I would recomend this book for ages no younger than 12+ do to content, though it depends on maturuity level.

"Confessions of a Murder Suspect was gripping from the first to the last page. There was never a dull moment and always new surprises.

The way James Patterson wrote, mentioning important things in passing but then adding "that is another story, for another conversation," made you never want to put the book down. The circumstances surrounding the murder would always keep you speculating who committed it, but would never give away anything for sure. The plot was fresh and original, the ending unexpected.

I highly recommend this book for anyone who is looking for a novel with neverending action. However, the book does require a more broad vocabular and does contain mild language. I would say this book is for children older than twelve due to content."




Just how I'd re-write some of it, you might wanna add a bit more

Could you have mentioned this a little bit earlier....like before I already submitted it

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Well, excuse me if I had a pencil to find

Somehow I had a feeling you would already have submitted it when I posted that

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Well, excuse me if I had a pencil to find

Somehow I had a feeling you would already have submitted it when I posted that

Well, I highly value ur opinion, but I didn't want to wait any longer so I made my Gram read it

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