The visitor

[Aira548784]

This is just an idea
Basically, there are two other worlds similar to our own except the people from them have tattoos on their faces. Anria, a royal on Nova, comes to earth to establish trading partnerships and instead finds herself falling for charming and sweet Daniel who also happens to be from Suralia, her home planets enemy. On top of all that, her planet is in trouble from an invading group of Suralians. If Anria can't establish this trading partnership with earth in time and get them to trust her, her home could be destroyed.

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[missingllama]

I like it!! <3333333333333!

[Aira548784]

thanks I came up with the idea a while ago and forgot about it then I was reading one of my old notebooks and came across it. I really liked the idea.

[Aira548784]

I think I'll get right on the first chapter and see how you guys like it when I'm done

[missingllama]

YAY!!!! Okay !

It seems like you have loads of good ideas That's awesome

[HungerCatchJay]

It sound epic! I'm looking forward to read it.

[Mia106]

I like the idea

[Aira548784]

thanks I'm still working on the first chapter so it may not be up for a while sorry. Although I can guarentee it will be worth the wait until it comes out here are some characters

Anria Royalstar-Princess of Nova. Goes to Earth to establish trading partnership. Brave courageous, loyal and kind. Falls for the prince of Suralia

Nico Royalstar-Prince of Nova. Anria's older brother. Been on many space trips. Protective of his sister, fearless, and noble. Will do anything to keep those he loves safe.

Commander Treyson-leader of the expedition to earth. Many years of experience in space. Good leader, responsible, brave, and good at giving orders. Can lead his people into battle.

Bran Royalblood-Prince of Suralia. Been on many space trips. Unlike many Suralians, he is kind, generous, sweet, and brave. Falls for the princess of Nova.

I'm not going to give too many characters away but those are some of the main characters.

[Aira548784]

heres the first chapter

Chapter 1
I stare out the window of the space craft as hundreds of stars flash past us. I watch as my home planet becomes smaller and smaller until it is swallowed up by the never ending blackness of space. Once it is gone, I sit back in my seat and look at the menu of food. Anything I could possibly want is on the menu and I scroll through it until I decide what I want. Then I order it from a young man in a blue apron. He bows politely and goes off to tell the cooks. I lean back and wait for the food to come. My brother, Nico, sleeps soundly beside me, his snores help to calm my growing anticipation. We would be there soon. That’s all I can think. When my food arrives, I eat it slowly, enjoying the delicious taste. I place the plate on a cart and it instantly disappears. That is the wonder of our technology. It is very advanced compared to Earths from what I’ve heard. They have the most basic of technology and it is quite sad. Although from the holograms I have seen, Earth is a very beautiful planet. My commander, Treyson, taps me on the shoulder and I turn my head. He smiles and leans down. “You may want to wake your brother, we are nearly there, Princess” He says. I nod and gently shake Nico. “Wah?” He asks sleepily. “We are almost there.” I say. He blinks the sleep from his eyes and stretches luxuriously.

“Is everyone ready for boarding?” Treyson asks. I nod. Before us is the ship that will take us down to earth. I board the ship and take a seat near the window. Once everyone is loaded onto the ship, Treyson closes the door and we are launched. I grip Nicos hand tightly as we enter the atmosphere and we make impact with the ground. I’m jolted by the force of the landing. A few moments later, Treyson opens the door and looks outside. Huge trees stand tall all around us as we exit the ship. The air is fresh and clean almost like home. I take a deep breath and exhale exultantly. It feels so good after being cooped up inside the ship for so long. “Alright, we’ll split into squads to find the people who inhabit this planet. Each squad will have a communicator. If you find anything, you are to notify the other squads. Understood?” He asks. We all nod. “Good,” He says before breaking us into squads. Excitement bubbles up inside me as I imagine what this planet has in store for me.

[Aira548784]

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